Mini Grand Prix Raises Money for Greenville Lion's Club
by andreblack

Comment by readme:
Interesting subject matter - unique! I think you'd do better with a tighter crop to highlight the subject. Compelling photo!

Mini Grand Prix Raises Money for Greenville Lion's Club
by andreblack

Comment by DragonStar:
I think tighter cropping, maybe onto the riders may have made this photo have a bit more impact.

Mini Grand Prix Raises Money for Greenville Lion's Club
by andreblack

Comment by C_Steve_G:
Image kinda bluish.

Mini Grand Prix Raises Money for Greenville Lion's Club
by andreblack

Comment by bongo:
May be my monitor, don't notice it with any other pictures...but is there a blue hue to this image...white balance?
Good job otherwise.

Mini Grand Prix Raises Money for Greenville Lion's Club
by andreblack

Comment by AmiYuy:
This goes in order of what I notice first:
1) Crop to the action! I want to see just one car or one and the other behind it so that I know what is going on from the picture! (Newspaper challenge or not, it's too unfocused/not specific enough.)
2) I can't even see the lead car that well because it's black against black...
3) Good color otherwise.
4) Good sharpness.
Score: 4

Mini Grand Prix Raises Money for Greenville Lion's Club
by andreblack

Comment by Kolya:
You could tighten this shot up by cropping out a lot of the road, sky and cones etc to the left of the image - perhaps just car 68 and the tires behind it - we'd still "get" the concept. The people waiting, street signs etc. just detract from the image (in my humble opinion).

Mini Grand Prix Raises Money for Greenville Lion's Club
by andreblack

Comment by melismatica:
This would be more effective if we could see crowds of onlookers watching the event instead of just those guys milling about in the background. They don't appear to be paying attention. This isn't the most exciting viewpoint. There is too much empty space in front of the tiny cars, effectively removing the viewer from the action.

Mini Grand Prix Raises Money for Greenville Lion's Club
by andreblack

Comment by superdave_909:
the racers kinda get lost in the image, maybe try zooming in?

Mini Grand Prix Raises Money for Greenville Lion's Club
by andreblack

Comment by digistoune:
Good photo that I think could be made better by zooming in a bit more or perhaps cropped to bring more attention to the subject.

Mini Grand Prix Raises Money for Greenville Lion's Club
by andreblack

Comment by djscarrd:
Whoa, 2 words...purple overcast. Too much purple.