Elephants
by Elemmennope

Comment by owen:
Great composition unfortunately the angle of the sun has put some shadow in the wrong spots particularly on the left elephant

Mazatlan Corner
by Elemmennope

Comment by L2:
Good composition and even though I'm not a big fan of borders, I think it works well here. Focal point has visual interest, but suffers a bit from vertical skew (lines on the front of the building aren't straight).

Unfortunately, the harsh shadows on the building are killing this shot. I see some shadow detail in the tree, but the loss is severe. The more modern buildings in the left side might show contrast between have/have not, but I'm not sure they add as much to the image as you might have hoped.

If you could re-shoot this when the lighting is better, I think it would make an interesting subject for exploration. If not, well, I hate to say it, but I don't know of a way to save this from looking like a travel snapshot of a cool building.

Kelley Point (Industrial Outtake)
by Elemmennope

Comment by Tranquil:
This is a great reflection on a moody piece .. glad to see the horizon is parallel to the frame. I think the shot is slightly underexposed, but some levels and dodging/burning could fix this. Next time, bring along a tripod and use a small aperture (higher f-number like f/22 for example) to get the "starburst" effect on the small points of light. I don't know why, but this transforms a flat shot into an interesting one. Lots of potential here -- thanks for sharing!

Edit: some spelling

Message edited by author 2005-12-10 17:19:41.

Elephants
by Elemmennope

Comment by vikas:
Its a beautiful shot ! Nicely composed.

A suggestion though, since the background and the color of elephant is similar, try blurring the background and the green foreground in PS.

Inner Eastside
by Elemmennope

Comment by _eug:
Shot straight into the sun? Ouch.

Inner Eastside
by Elemmennope

Comment by UNTITLED:
This is a cool idea, but just seems to busy. Maybe if you moved closer to the chainlink and blurred it.

Inner Eastside
by Elemmennope

Comment by Jammur:
A lot of dynamics here, inside/outside, claustrophobia. The dark areas work to add mystery to the image

Inner Eastside
by Elemmennope

Comment by Leace:
the fence is very distracting

Inner Eastside
by Elemmennope

Comment by swankFoto:
the sun interferes with my ability to enjoy this one as much as i would like to had it been framed or cropped differently.

Inner Eastside
by Elemmennope

Comment by TechnoShroom:
Very interesting use of the fence.