so tired
by euclids

Comment by dr rick:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

The message
The girls do appear to be waiting, so the photo is appropriate for the challenge. But people wait all the time; it's part of being human. And this picture doesn't convey anything special about waiting, so it's not very interesting.

Creative choices
The position of the models within the photo is great, and their expressions depict the tired, bored kind of waiting that was intended. But there are so many other elements that the photo is very cluttered. This draws attention away from the subject.

Technical aspects
There is a very slight green color cast (common with fluorescent and mercury vapor lighting) but it's barely noticable. Otherwise the photo is technically very well made; focus, exposure, and preparation for web display are all great.

so tired
by euclids

Comment by abreul:
dude you are so bad... this lady were trying to take a time off and you did no let them take it and not just that you post the picture on the internet. what a shame

so tired
by euclids

Comment by fallingretina:
what does this have to do with waiting?

so tired
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Comment by briphoto:
Nice photo, doesn't really say "Waiting" very strongly to me.

ahhh....
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Comment by seanami:
This doesn't seem to tie into the theme very strongly.

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Comment by omnibus:
I think this would work better cropped tighter to get rid of the sky. Nice B&W, the soft background gives a good feeling of motion.

ahhh....
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Comment by galblue:
a bit washed out at top of image good grab shot though ?

ahhh....
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Comment by L1:
I wish I could make out more detail in her face, especially around the eyes. Interesting subject. Contrast adjustment might help. The umbrella seems a bit blown out, along with some areas in the BG.

ahhh....
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Comment by Brad:
I don't see multiple sources of light.

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by euclids

Comment by boomer:
Fails to meet challenge unless I'm really missing something. On top of that, the image doesn't hold much interest. 1