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Part of Time
10/12/2004 12:28:29 PM
Part of Time
by Jokull

Comment by hannes:
Amazing shot!
Part of Time
10/10/2004 06:20:00 AM
Part of Time
by Jokull

Comment by Gauti:
Really neat idea. lets see, about 9 sec exposure? maybe you should have polished the clock glass better, annoying dots there. the title isn't strong enough, but I can't think of any better.
Part of Time
10/06/2004 11:06:56 PM
Part of Time
by Jokull

Comment by rennie:
Looks like the clock had some spots (on the glass at the edge and on the left side of the image - under 1). The concept is good, pity these details came out :(
I give it 7.
Waiting for the welfare cheque!
06/11/2004 08:20:17 PM
Waiting for the welfare cheque!
by Jokull

Comment by photom:
Effective portrait - well rendered in black and white. Border is way overpowering
Waiting for the welfare cheque!
06/11/2004 07:25:40 PM
Waiting for the welfare cheque!
by Jokull

Comment by aerogurl:
Great Photo but the title should be changed.
Waiting for the welfare cheque!
06/10/2004 04:47:10 PM
Waiting for the welfare cheque!
06/09/2004 04:39:28 PM
Waiting for the welfare cheque!
by Jokull

Comment by LN13:
Nice photo, but without the title, I just see a guy sitting on a bench.
Waiting for the welfare cheque!
06/09/2004 07:26:23 AM
Waiting for the welfare cheque!
06/08/2004 08:10:54 PM
Waiting for the welfare cheque!
by Jokull

Comment by Kolya:
Nice exposure - with simple and crisp subject.
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Chains of the ocean.
05/17/2004 02:36:45 PM
Chains of the ocean.
by Jokull

Comment by Fotowereld:
Critique Club Comment:

It seems to me that you have a good eye for colour; the chains on the rocks both have so-called earth colours and they work great together giving the picture a natural look which fits the title well.

The composition gives the photo an abstract touch. The way you divided the photo into squares, makes the background get as much attention as the chain. Since the chain is your subject, you could think of other ways to present it in your picture. Your camera was straight above the chain, so the 'huge'-ness you speak of in your own comments, is a bit lost. A shot from beside the chain facing up, would have showed the size of the chain maybe better.

Like other members already have noticed: the focus of the photo is more on the rocks than on the chains, so the chains are slightly unsharp. The attention is thereby also more drawn to the rocks than to the chains.

The photo met the challenge well; the rust is very much present in the texture of the chains and in the colour. When the light would have been a bit less sharp, the texture and colours would have been even more clear. I see your ISO was on 200, for outdoor shooting you can choose an ISO of 100 or less, like 50.

All in all it's a good picture which is peacefull to look at.

Fotowereld.
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