Bayside
by fallingretina

Comment by madison461:
I don't like the greenish cast to the sky. The rest is beautiful.

Communication
by fallingretina

Comment by JunieMoon:
Wiring is a good subject to show busy, but this seemed very rough. The photo did not come out very smooth, though your sky is very well exposed.

Communication
by fallingretina

Comment by DelRioPhoto:
I like the idea, but you might have over saturated it.

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by fallingretina

Comment by boomer:
Doesn't really illustrate CHOICE, to me. Seems like a cut-and-dried suicide pic, if there is such a thing. In other words, he doesn't look like he's still debating the choice. His mind is made up. Anyway, background blends too much with the subject (where are his eyes and arms and such?) Seems out of focus as well

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by fallingretina

Comment by Curious:
This is a disturbing subject and I think the composition choices made here add to the disturbance. The black space looming over the top of the subject, the inability to see the eyes, and the blurred subject all make the overall impact more urgent. I think the photographer has really captured the lonliness and desperation of the subject matter.

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by fallingretina

Comment by hannafate:
Too dark. The whole top half just looks like a black blob.

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by fallingretina

Comment by wkoffel:
I'm sure I'm not the only one to tell you that it's too dark to understand the subject. This happened to me on one challenge I entered. Don't let it discourage you. Keep shooting! (umm...so to speak....shoot photos please!)

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by fallingretina

Comment by iseelifethroughlenses:
yes.

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Comment by VincentValle:
Very heavy!

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by fallingretina

Comment by Kolya:
Disturbing but well executed (pardon the pun!). Looks a tad blurry to me, and grainy as well. Perhaps a little tighter crop (not so much darkness at the top) would add more drama (not that there isn't enough already). Also - the hand and face look a little too pale and washed out. I think this would work in black and white as well. Tough subject matter.