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by scwortman

Comment by MarkJay:
Your image had / has great potential. THe problem for me is, I'm having a hard time making out part of the silhouette. I can't tell if they are facing front or back or, where the child on the right side's head has gone? :-) It's a nice silhouette, with nice sunset colors. If you could do it again, I'd try to work on making sure both children's heads are visible against the sun in the back.

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Comment by Donatien:
Nice shot of what appears to be a great sunset!. My guess is that you'll receive comments on the centering, but I guess I'll add another one; too centered. Also the star reflection in the water / sand takes away a bit of the silhouette. Perhaps it would have been better with it edited away?

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Comment by lwkimages:
I love the golden cast here. The horizon seems a bit tilted, but this is still a wonderful image. 9

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Comment by Toddh:
I think you were on the right track here. If I can offer a little advice, I would have shot this from a little lower and had the reflected sun directly behind the subjects. Also I would have had the two children stand seperate and holding hands instead. The reason I say this is that it almost looks like it is one child with 4 legs (not really, but you know what I'm getting at).... and perhaps shot it a little tighter, lifted the contrast a little more to make it more of a shilouette and a little more saturation. I hope this helps. Good Luck, Todd. 6.

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Comment by David.C:
I like the colors and the reflected light source, but I think it would have worked better if not centered.

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Comment by Zoomdak:
Great beach shot. I think the people could be a little more silhouetted (like the model on the left wearing a darker t-shrirt) but it doesn't matter that much. I also think it would be cool if they were facing the sunset, which I can't tell if they are or not. Horizon seems slightly tilted. This is only my opinion on minor detail. Overall it is a great shot. 7

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Comment by Moni:
Sea photos are always great for Silhouettes

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Comment by Sonifo:
hmmm...some advice. :-) Great shot, buuuut did you try to take the photo with the kids in the rule of thirds area? Might be better for the composition. Maybe even get down and take it to the right/back of them to stil achieve the effect of the sun. Not sure...good luck. Very nice!

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Comment by carina:
This is lovely but too centered....still an 8!

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Comment by Glen King:
I like this for the fact that there is some color in it. Many of te images in this challenge are so stark, black against white.