The Future...
by scwortman

Comment by leaf:
interesting shot, and fairly interesting. I am not sure if this one benefits from being centered or not. i think there is too much going on in the direct center and then nothing for the rest of the picture. it doesn't keep my eye moving, and thus i won't look at the image very long. perhaps if the people were to the side with the sun on the other side... using the rule of thirds for placement. Perhaps if the poeple were walking it would provide a little more interest. Decent shot though, decently exposed, and a good start of an idea.
-from the critique club.

Exhale...
by scwortman

Comment by lakritstroll:
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Exhale...
by scwortman

Comment by reevey:
Interesting... I'm not sure about it though, but it's purely down to personal taste, I'm not sure I like it that much. Perhaps a bit too much noise?

Rocklin...
by scwortman

Comment by willem:
The sky has a purple hue to it. I would have chosen not to include the rail. You could have used the grass as foreground to create depth.

Rocklin...
by scwortman

Comment by cghubbell:
The sky looks a bit too purple to me, but I did enjoy the symmetry with the guardrail and the road's bend.

Rocklin...
by scwortman

Comment by jodiecoston:
The colors in this shot seem a bit surreal - I think it must be the blue color of the sky. A bit too much contrast, maybe.

Rocklin...
by scwortman

Comment by photom:
Composition works nicely - except for the guard rail at the bottom left. Colors seem a bit over saturated - but work well together.

Rocklin...
by scwortman

Comment by e301:
Oh man I'd have made a bit more of the parallels of the barrier and the roadway ... perhaps justnshot a little lower, just to bring the barrier a little more strongly into frame. Great idea though, and good solid shooting. Given the high-key landscape shot it calls out for a graduated filter, just to calm the exposure of the clouds, but that's your won choice: I just think it would accentuate the graphic elements of the composition a touch more. Neat idea though, and good shot.

Rocklin...
by scwortman

Comment by tomzinho:
i like the composition with the bit of man made stuff in the lower left corner. i'm wondering if there was something you could have done to have brought out the blue in the sky a bit more . . .

Rocklin...
by scwortman

Comment by coolhar:
I think you've got too much in this shot making it seem busy, maybe composing it in a way that left the guard rail out of the foreground would work better, colors are good