Brooklyn in Summer.
by the-O-ster

Comment by arpita:
So hard to find the subject in this haze of red... would probably be better off with just black and white. and maybe a cleaner bed :D

Brooklyn in Summer.
by the-O-ster

Comment by claudia26:
very 70's

Brooklyn in Summer.
by the-O-ster

Comment by vadvirag:
Whi is this photo red? What did you want to express with this colour? My problem is that composition is quite busy and it's hard to find the main subject and nudity among all things here. You could have spent more time to find a good angle for your shot and preparing the environment. Sorry, but I don't really find the conscious way here...

d70.
by the-O-ster

Comment by the-O-ster:

Originally posted by Neuferland: Not sure exactly where you were headed with this shot but the mirrored sunglasses are very distracting, pulls you away from shot. The camera is also more of a distraction than a help the to shot for me. I like the pose of the person in the shot, just get rid of the glasses and the camera and you would have much cleaner, nicer shot. A 4 as is

the camera and glasses ARE the shot

d70.
by the-O-ster

Comment by David.C:
Lighting: even and good.
Pose: The reflective glasses have got to go.
Background: works well with the skin tone.

d70.
by the-O-ster

Comment by Neuferland:
Not sure exactly where you were headed with this shot but the mirrored sunglasses are very distracting, pulls you away from shot. The camera is also more of a distraction than a help the to shot for me. I like the pose of the person in the shot, just get rid of the glasses and the camera and you would have much cleaner, nicer shot. A 4 as is

d70.
by the-O-ster

Comment by TooCool:
Awesome composition! Great lighting. My only complaint is that I find trying to figure out what is in the reflections rather than looking at the overall shot. Was this a self portrait? Or is that the photographer in the reflection?
TC

d70.
by the-O-ster

Comment by GeneralE:
That's some serious-looking photography going on there ....

d70.
by the-O-ster

Comment by L1:
I would really like this one except for one thing...the reflections in the glasses seem to show clothing and miscellaneous equipment rather than something more visually appealing. Focus and detail are excellent, and I love the background. The reflections may be just a nitpick, but I would really like to see something more interesting or attention grabbing than laundry. Excellent attempt. :o)

d70.
by the-O-ster

Comment by soccerdad:
This is pretty interesting all the way around. Glasses give just a hint of mystery with the lens reflection fitting the overall theme, camera gives a hint of context, and the crop, though very tight, doesn't hurt the overall image. A little more light on the right side might have improved this enough to move it from 8 to 9.