Air Guitar
by Albertmdh

Comment by middelbosch:
love the idea, did you use the flash? I find the light to harsh

Harm

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Comment by mrblobby:
what is the difference between my comment

"Good Idea, but the shadow on the white paper is a dead give away and detracts from the image it could have been."

And

"move your subjects away from the background."

which was maked as Photographer found comment helpful. ????

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Comment by johnnydpc:
Was the idea to create an image of the hand leaving the pen? IMO, the pen and hand look as if they are placed on a surface. The peon or the hand should have given a feeling of motion.

The pen seems to be out of focus.

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Comment by basia03:
this image seems overexposed and lacks quality... perhaps too much jpeg compression did that? technically it could've looked better if it was closer to 150K allowed here... the subject and composition don't present any interest to me either... as far as interpretation of the challenge is concerned, it looks to me like the hand and the pen are just resting on the flat surface, that's all...

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Comment by Rgarcia:
Interesting idea, but the choice of lighting and background makes the shot quite flat. It lacks movement.

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Comment by charbroiledchum:
didn't read the instructions did we?

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Comment by aKiwi:
Please choose 1:
A. A different coloured pen would contrast better with the background.
B. A different coloured background would contrast better with the pen.

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Comment by mrblobby:
Good Idea, but the shadow on the white paper is a dead give away and detracts from the image it could have been.

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Comment by wakey:
If you are not actually going to drop it, and just lie it on the table, at least make sure the shadows are not so prominent. (or if you actually DID drop it, move further from a wall, because it takes from the value of the picture) =)

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Comment by soccerdad:
Focus could be stronger.