Blue Cheese
by Rasai

Comment by skewsme:
great title and love the clouds and colors

Oh No ! He brakes too HARD & too LATE!
by Rasai

Comment by BJokerud:
Cool photo!

Oh No ! He brakes too HARD & too LATE!
by Rasai

Comment by C_Steve_G:
Your title is two statements. Perhaps "Too Late, Too Hard" would have been sufficient to allow the viewer to interpret the intent of your capture.

Oh No ! He brakes too HARD & too LATE!
by Rasai

Comment by ByHelnwein:
DNMC - Not the least bit compelling. Please review challenge description.

Oh No ! He brakes too HARD & too LATE!
by Rasai

Comment by oldbimmercoupe:
windy title aside, nice capture.

Oh No ! He brakes too HARD & too LATE!
by Rasai

Comment by saintaugust:
i'd just pull the handbrake.

Geology Rocks !
by Rasai

Comment by PGerst:
** Hello from the Critique Club **

Very interesting image, I like your progression of geology from the rock to the pure elements.

Composition
The main problem with this photo is in the composition: it is too flat. I do like the progression from the larger rock background to the smaller rock, to the smaller elements. This progression is a benefit to this photo. However, every object is essentially in the same plane. A tighter angle with more texture on the rock holding the elements would have led to a more dynamic photo.

Technical
The lighting, while soft, is flat, leading to the compositional comment above. A second source of light would help to bring out the texture in the rock and add depth to the photo. The lighting then effectively places everything in the same plane.

Overall, it is interesting from the placement of the objects. It would be good to experiment with additional light sources and get in tighter with the shot, perhaps dropping the background out altogether to help isolate the stone itself. It definitely has promise and would be a good one to enter in a Free Study.

Marin County Sunrise
by Rasai

Comment by hotpasta:
great sky

Marin County Sunrise
by Rasai

Comment by Beryl:
I have been around for 82+ years, and I have never seen a more beautiful sky.

Blue Moon-4.jpg
by Rasai

Comment by Blue Moon:
lmao, my eyes are green! :) I wish they were this color though, cuz it looks cool

Message edited by author 2009-07-23 10:25:21.