DistantColours
by LMahoney

Comment by snaffles:
Greetings from the Critique Club

First impression: Unappealing snapshot with an odd white balance.

Artistic: If you're seeing a murky yellow sky on your LCD but see an orange sky through your viewfinder, something needs correcting. I like the gull balancing out the comp, but the main impression is flat and drab. Lacks the pop factor so loved here.

Technical: Good use of thirds and meets the challenge, but your ISO looks awfully low for what seems to have been very poor light. Also the viewer has to search a little to realize it's a lighthouse in the distance. Everything is just too small and too distant.

Overall: Not a bad attempt, but I think you need to do some homework on lighting and white balance. Keep shooting and entering!

Feel free to PM me.

Susan

DistantColours
by LMahoney

Comment by bvy:
Lovely hues in this.

DistantColours
by LMahoney

Comment by Remus_2011:

GPS Goes Here
by LMahoney

Comment by bassbone:
Very cool shot...a great find. The posthumous art gallery 'award' is a pretty cool deal...it shows your artistic vision.

Open Road
by LMahoney

Comment by Darkpixel:
I also ride... great photo

GPS Goes Here
by LMahoney

Comment by tnun:
lovely circles, reminds me of my early passion for the compass (protractor), and nicely set off by the lines and right angles.

GPS Goes Here
by LMahoney

Comment by ciaeagle:
Creative idea but not an interesting shot for me.

GPS Goes Here
by LMahoney

Comment by bvy:
Dusty bubbles. Nice.

Open Road
by LMahoney

Comment by FourPointX:
now this calls to me. nice.

GPS Goes Here
by LMahoney

Comment by posthumous:
good abstract, plus it has some ideas

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