Old Laser Gun
by odesuk

Comment by FrankRobinson:
Hi Viacheslav, welcome to the Critique Zone!

Obviously this was not the right shot for the challenge, but putting that aside...

I am not sure what you are trying to do with this shot. If it is an HDR experiment, then for me it is a little cartoony, but I don't know why you would need HDR to shoot this subject, good lighting should be enough. HDR really excels where there are really bright and dark areas which both need to be brought out.

Your lens won't shoot at f1.4, so I suspect that you mean this was shot at f4. Is it enough? Depends on what you are trying to do! The muzzle is out of focus, but that could be intentional. I also think that it is cropped a little too tightly - give it some space!

Anyway, I look forward to seeing some more of your (intentional) work in the future...

Happy hunting,

Frank.

Old Laser Gun
by odesuk

Comment by odesuk:
That was an error and i did not know how to remove this image. Sorry

Old Laser Gun
by odesuk

Comment by Lydia:
I don't understand... *sigh*

I'm sure it's my fault though...


I may or may not be voting, so please do not equate my comment with any score.

Old Laser Gun
by odesuk

Comment by tvsometime:
I can't see a bottle. Posted by mistake?

Old Laser Gun
by odesuk

Comment by mefnj:
??

Old Laser Gun
by odesuk

Comment by avalanche1030:
Did you enter the wrong picture or looking for a brown?

Old Laser Gun
by odesuk

Comment by disassociation:
i dont normally do this.... but DNMC???

Old Laser Gun
by odesuk

Comment by jmritz:
This absolutely a laser gun.

Old Laser Gun
by odesuk

Comment by daisydavid:
only with the ps1, maybe ;)

Old Laser Gun
by odesuk

Comment by Revecca:
Not sure how this meets the challenge...?