River City at Dusk
by sleekr

Comment by Neuferland:
The darkness of the shot leaves me a bit cold, heck it looks cold there! ;) But the dark patch on the lower left is very distracting and keeps taking me out of the shot, if the cropping was slightly different and you had played with the hues just a tad?

Flight of the Bumblebee
by sleekr

Comment by OneSweetSin:
*Critique Club*

I simply love this shot. During voting I smiled at the sight of the paper airplane. I had considered it but never thought of using sheet music to do it with. Your choice of music for the challenge represents this challenge even more than the plane.

Your focus is just to soft on everything with nothing really in focus and had you had the focus a little cleaner it would improve this greatly. The background is also very distracting in this shot. I a not sure what it is but the lines in it pull your attention away.

Very creative and clever attempt at this challenge.

River City at Dusk
by sleekr

Comment by Homunculus:
Good shot i just think it is a little dark.

River City at Dusk
by sleekr

Comment by timmi:
Great dramatic sky, but the image lacks detail. There is nothing visible in the lower left corner. The buildings look flat. It looks overprocessed. Good use of thirds and lower horizon.

River City at Dusk
by sleekr

Comment by nborton:
great sky to top off the city landscape.

River City at Dusk
by sleekr

Comment by train:
very nice I like this

River City at Dusk
by sleekr

Comment by Fayech:
wow. amazing clouds.

River City at Dusk
by sleekr

Comment by tfaust:
This is a great idea for the urban challenge, but the image seems a little dark. The focus seems to be on the clouds due to lighting. A hard image to get.

River City at Dusk
by sleekr

Comment by cielo_vieyra:
I think it is a little too dark. Stil it is a good picture

River City at Dusk
by sleekr

Comment by irenes:
Really great view, the coulds are fantastic. It's a bit underexposed towards the bottom left though..