Lines And Curves
by rockhopper

Comment by mandyp:
The picture seems a little flat to me. I'd like to see the model looking at the camera. Nice blue sky.

Lines And Curves
by rockhopper

Comment by ErikaS:
Sorry but that looks more like a snap shot. Maybe you could have picked a person with a bit more curves.

Lines And Curves
by rockhopper

Comment by Allyrellia:
This had more of a snapshotty feel to it, in my opinion. I think perhaps the cleavage shot didn't work quite the way you wanted it to... the idea was good, but I think this would have been much stronger if she'd been wearing a formfitting dark (or white) outfit, been leaning against the pole to show a body profile (curves and lines). I think perhaps this might have looked a bit less like a snapshot had you done B&W.

Still, it was a good idea, and you had a lovely model. :)

Lines And Curves
by rockhopper

Comment by Falc:
Feels like a roadside snap, dull and uninspiring.

Lines And Curves
by rockhopper

Comment by bayonic:
you must be a marketing/sales person coz you know how to wrangle a high score :)