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| 06/07/2004 10:42:43 AM |
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| 05/15/2004 06:01:12 PM |
Lines And Curvesby rockhopperComment by Glen King: Nice idea, but I think you used a photo you just happen to take of your girlfriend on an outing. Put her in a bikini to emphasize the curves aspect or perhaps unzip the top entirely and take a close up of her breasts with the crossbars between them. 6 |
| 05/15/2004 08:28:52 AM |
Lines And Curvesby rockhopperComment by melismatica: This is an unpleasant shot. Mainly because the model's boob is about to fall out. I'm not a prude but, honestly, this model's figure is not attractive enough to pull this off. You just want her to zip her top back up. She's too bony looking for the 'curves' your title suggests. Also, you should have made the shot at a moment when the wind wasn't blowing her hair in her face. The colors are rather drab and the model's pale skin practically blends into her surroundings.
The composition is good. |
| 05/14/2004 09:04:44 PM |
Lines And Curvesby rockhopperComment by taterbug: i think if the model were in something brighter/darker, she would stand out more and improve this shot. nice idea. also maybe crop a little off top. |
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| 05/14/2004 12:09:45 PM |
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| 05/14/2004 08:33:37 AM |
Lines And Curvesby rockhopperComment by cghubbell: Too much hair in the face... Hides the facial curves. The subject here is really the metal frame and the girl, yet my eyes are challenged by the background scenery as well. Needs to be composed more selectively. |
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| 05/14/2004 07:35:22 AM |
Lines And Curvesby rockhopperComment by Neuferland: Yeah, you could say lines but the curves is questionable :) The outfit really hides the curves and the wind blowing on her face is distracting. A much tighter crop, leaving just her and maybe lining up the poles, coming more from in front of the subject? Also the lighting is a bit harsh, maybe tone it down a bit in PS? A 3 |
| 05/13/2004 07:41:45 PM |
Lines And Curvesby rockhopperComment by Cam: Hey I like it, I am wondering if your really needed the entire sculpture, I would have found it more intesting with a closer crop of the girl, and a partial of the sculpture. But a nice shot and idea. |
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| 05/13/2004 10:56:53 AM |
Lines And Curvesby rockhopperComment by Tallbloke: Nice idea, I can imagine this shot working but its needs a little more conviction....did you bottle out?. My guess is that this isnt what you had imagined either! As it stands it just doesnt really do the job. |
| 05/13/2004 10:20:12 AM |
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