Out to Pasture...
by NikonJeb

Comment:
This composition feels a bit too centered to me, espescially with that large tree right behind it.

Perfect Day in the Country
by kellyo

Comment:
Is it just me or were you leaning to the right?

The Body is a Conductor
by rmezzo

Comment:
I hope no one tries this at home!

Envy
by Kelli

Comment:
I think it would be better to have one of the subjects in focus.

Beaming With Pride
by nds

Comment:
Cool photo, but where's the sin?

All Your Staples Are Belong To Me
by quiapz

Comment:
Good idea, but poorly executed. Halos around staplers, poorly lit, dirty looking wall. A little smaller DOF would help to further separate the staplers in the background.

Gimme More
by Wenders11

Comment:
With the title "Gimme More," shouldn't the hand be open, not closed?

Into the wrath of the glove
by Man_Called_Horse

Comment:
I'm sorry, but this just doesn't cut it as sinful.

Plates? Never heard of 'em.
by timfythetoo

Comment:
I like where you're going with this, I just wish you would have taken it further. Show more empty beer cans and food wrappers and food crumbs.. maybe even show him passed out in the chair holding half a hamburger...with a little sloppier face...
The surroundings look like a house under construction, more of an environmental shot would perhaps be more appropriate shot.

"All in!" Greed
by titus_is

Comment:
Poorly lit. Looks like this is taken on asphalt? Why not on green felt or poker table or simply a table? It would be better withou the fingers barely showing.