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| 08/04/2008 08:31:38 AM |
In a World of His Ownby WildcardComment: I'm not sure what you were trying to do with this, but it doesn't work for me. The image is blurry in general (hand held in low light?) and the "motes" in the big bright area are distracting. |
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| 08/04/2008 08:29:03 AM |
The Landingby rbeckerComment: It would soooo rock if the wings were not blurred! But a great shot none-the-less! |
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| 08/04/2008 08:28:19 AM |
Night Storm 07-11-08by davidwComment: Interesting image. I like the moon-bow (I assume that is the moon), but the scene is just a bit overexposed. The house looks great, but the sky, with the motion blur of the clouds and the really bright moon, detracts. You might be able to use some burn over the top part of the image to tone down the moon. |
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| 08/04/2008 08:25:53 AM |
Saltryby silverhawkComment: I believe you mean 'Sultry', unless you are making a REALLY bad pun about taste! (Major groan if so!)
As for the image, more sweat, or a spritz with a water bottle to leave the appearance of sweat on her torso, would make it better. |
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| 08/04/2008 08:23:02 AM |
Hopefulby jeroweComment: The look on her face is a bit odd. I appreciate the attempt at the serious pose, but she looks more annoyed than anything. I would also crop/clone the hay bale to the right out of th frame placing her in the right third, and crop it just above the trees to eliminate the dead space up top. There is also some chromatic aberration around the tree tops. Not sure what you can do about that except crop event tighter so the sky is not in the image. |
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| 08/04/2008 08:17:55 AM |
GABRIELLEby jwillertonComment: This is quite well done! The only nitpick I have is the amount of OOF foreground, including the right hand. I don't mind the hips-back being OOF, but the foreground elements draw the eye away from those amazing eyes and classic bone structure. |
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| 08/04/2008 08:16:14 AM |
Peoria & Westernby theSajComment: The lines are nice, but the train is a bit too centered in the frame. If you had the train further to the left in the frame it would feel more like it was moving into the picture as opposed to just about to leave. |
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| 08/04/2008 08:15:11 AM |
Decay...inherent in all thingsby DrAchooComment: Nicely composed, though the contrasts are a bit to heavy in the background hills and the sky. I have to wonder if the color version, with that wonderful cloud pattern, wouldn't be better... |
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| 08/04/2008 08:13:12 AM |
Daydreamsby PeterPicComment: This has a lot going for it, but the 'hands on the backside' is a bit crude for the theme and the dreamy framing. It would be nicer with his hands on the small of her back, holding her close instead of looking like he is copping a feel... But that may just be my opinion... |
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| 08/04/2008 08:10:47 AM |
Blue Damselfly on Horsetailsby GeneralEComment: Nicely done, though the composition is a bit off. I would suggest cropping out the blank top-right of the photo, placing the damselfly on the bottom right third-point, while keeping the tops of the grasses in the frame. |
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