Memorial lairomeM
by levyj413

Comment:
This is an amazing shot. I somehow missed it, but couldn't help but notice it in your profile. Definitely a good choice on the centered composition, and the clarity is stunning for a night shot.

Sunrise Waves
by hotpasta

Comment:
This is too damn cool. Instant favorite! Truely amazing!

Listless
by escapetooz

Comment:
I love the feel of this one. Regardless of other comments, I find the processing and the forced look of her pose quite effective. Seems like the kind of thing that goes unnoticed when nobody's paying attention. I dont know if it's the crop, but something keeps leading my eye out of the picture. It may be the white cloth in the bg..

By the way, I like your lighting techniques on portraiture.

The End of the Road
by MAK

Comment:
Wow, i love the look and feel of this shot. Great post processing! I only find the light blotch around her right foot a little distracting, but very minutely. Congrats on the ribbon

Mitosis: A Process Of Cell Division
by slickchik

Comment:
Cool photo. Very interesting subject, and I think the composition does work well here. I had a color issue with DPC submissions for a while too. Dunno if this helps, but I found out I had to convert the color profile to sRGB 2.1 Under the EDIT>Concert to Profile menu.. in CS2. Hope that does the trick

Darragh
by Brookied

Comment:
I like the soft lighting in this one. Works really well. Might want to try a little bit of lightening around the eyes, because they are a little hard to recognize. Also the white bar behind the subject that runs along the frame of the photo is a bit distracting, as it leads the viewer straight out of the photo, perhaps a little bit of burning would fix that. Again, I like the photo. Just wanted to give a little criticism. Hope it helps :)!

Michelle Senior Portrait.jpg
by kirbic

Comment:
Looking at it again, I just realize that the OOF hiar on the left shoulder is the only thing i find slightly distracting. It sort of disrupts the flow.

Michelle Senior Portrait.jpg
by kirbic

Comment:
This is a great portrait. I like the colors in it. I think I prefer this one over the toned one, though both are good. I also think that the OOF chin/mouth works because it emphasizes the eyes. It gives the photo a real definite focus point. If it were any softer it wouldnt work.

Dirty
by LalliSig

Comment:
This is amazing. I would love to know how you got the eyes! I know it was dark, but i think i would like to see a tiny bit more DOF

The Leaves Are Falling All Around
by jtlee321

Comment:
Amazing shot. Love the vibrance here. Also, thanks a bunch for posting the unedited version. I found it helpful!