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| 11/01/2008 07:00:22 AM |
Somewhere Over The Rainbowby ErinKirstenComment: Playing around with my browser size, if I crop from the top of the trees up out of the image, and from the right of the yellow border behind her to the right out of the image, I see a much stronger shot. There is less 'edge distraction' and I can focus more on the main subject. Her pose is engaging and I like the colors throughout in contrast to her monochromatic outfit. The textures of the bricks play off nicely against her fur vest. Nice capture. Try the re-crop to see if you agree. |
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| 11/01/2008 06:56:54 AM |
Rainy Dayby tfarrell23Comment: Since the person is walking to stage left... perhaps waiting until he was between the pole and frame left would place him better in the shot. From a personal preference, I'm not overly fond of this style post-processing. I know that everyone is different, so I won't take off for that, but I do feel it competes with your main subject. |
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| 11/01/2008 06:54:52 AM |
Amazing Graceby charmayneComment: Those are some worn out gloves. I can see the years of street playing in his face. Like the composition and focus. The over saturation works nicely as well. Good capture. |
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| 11/01/2008 06:53:17 AM |
Jogging for Jugs - Pink month breast cancer awareness by tjmuellerComment: Colorful characters you have here. Only thing is with your desaturation I feel without it being a true b/w desaturation, it works against what you're trying to accomplish. Try a true b/w desat, with a vignette to help eliminate border clutter and see if the image is stronger. |
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| 11/01/2008 06:48:40 AM |
Stroll on the beachby sfmorrisComment: I'm trying hard to find something in the shot other than you secretly snapping a pic of a lady on the beach. I have no idea what she's looking at, she's not strolling in the shot... just trying my best to 'get it'. |
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| 11/01/2008 06:30:45 AM |
man on a missionby libertyComment: What mission? I think the viewer has no sense of what's going on here other than maybe having gone to the store for some detergent? Overall colors in the shot are fine, but there is no main subject/idea conveyed to me or the viewer. |
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| 11/01/2008 06:19:35 AM |
Street Musicianby samanwarComment: Interesting person you've captured. I think with as much pixels as cameras have now days, that if you had cropped out from his waist down, and had him fill the frame we'd have seen a strong composition that keeps the eye from wandering away from him. His mic stand pull my eye right down to the sidewalk and out the frame as it is cropped now. Scratch that... if you do that, you lose a sense of where he's at. Not sure, but I feel there's a stronger crop, but messing with my browser size and moving him around, I'll be danged if I can find it. Maybe this is as good as this image gets. |
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| 10/31/2008 02:55:21 PM |
Sunday Roast... Or Not?by TomCubisComment: Cropping is your friend. The right part of this image doesn't add to the overall feel of the shot. The writing on the wall to the right pulls my eye away from the man at the table. A square crop that removes that will keep me looking at him and the people behind him and engage me more. Toning and exposure are good. |
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| 10/31/2008 02:53:42 PM |
Crowded Crosswalkby EssAreDubyaComment: Other than the man in the suit being a little interesting, I feel you've capture a crowded crosswalk, but failed to engage your viewer in the shot. It records a moment in time, but I don't feel it does much more than that. |
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| 10/31/2008 02:51:52 PM |
Urban Artist by LVicariComment: Recropping with my browser so that the man is on frame right instead of the middle, to me, makes a stronger shot. I feel the space on the right doesn't add to the shot. Post processing and colors are very fitting for your image. |
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