Grazin'
by taterbug

Comment:
The grass just seems to be a little too bright for my taste. I keep looking at the grass instead of the horses. Perhaps if you could make the grass a little closer in darkness to the light tree on the left hand side of the picture? That fence post seems to be a little distracting as well. I don't know, just my thoughts after looking at the photo for a few minutes. I do indeed like the line of the horses and the saturation tone that you used.

Take care,
Dave

The Drapery Falls
by aboutimage

Comment:
This is by far my favorite shot in your portfolio....fantastic composition and use of desaturation. Spot on!

Dave

Reaching Out
by aboutimage

Comment:
I like the simplicity of this image, and the choice of B&W is appropriate. My only crituque would be that I feel like there is possibly too much sky and you could crop it a little more. That being said, its all a matter of personal preference. Nice work.

Dave

july26.jpg
by toddhead

Comment:
too cute! :)

Dark Days
by tristalisk

Comment:
Wonderful B&W shot here. Love the reflection. Nice capture.

Dave

Sittin on the Dock of the Bay
by idnic

Comment:
I like this shot a lot. It makes me think that I'm right there on the dock with the way you did the composition.

landscape
by arlanbart

Comment:
Nice idea, but I think this shot would have been better if more of the wood grain was in focus.

wallW.jpg
by JordanZ

Comment:
I like the idea behind this shot, but I too feel like it may have been better with a more level angle. I like the aperature setting...I think you were right on with that. The color of the sky is also right on, so I think working with the composition a little bit is my best advice. Nice work!

Dave

Time Passes
by phinbob

Comment:
This is my favorite picture you have posted so far. As Rex said, you could probably play a little with brightness and contrast controls to make it a little bit better. The composition is great!

Dave

Tucson Monsoon
by phinbob

Comment:
Definitely a nice capture with all 3 of your lighting shots that you have posted. Living in SF, CA I don't ever get a chance to take lighting shots b/c we don't really ever have any thunderstorms here. Much like some of the others have already said, you might want to continue to seek different locations to take more lighting shots in the future since the house and tree distract a little from this shot. If you have this shot with some mountains in the background or something, it would be really nice.

Good job,
Dave