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| 12/23/2003 04:33:00 AM |
Iris Drops by SharonSComment: Congrats on your first ribbon!
This is beautiful, and I'm thrilled to see that it was taken with the 300D.
Go team Canon! |
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| 12/14/2003 04:06:20 PM |
Tired Student, Losing Focusby brianlhComment: From the Critique Club :
Good job on your first set up shot!
You did a great job with the lighting and soft focus here. Your choice of b&w works well here.
My only suggestions would be to have angled the book differently so we dont see the ucla stamp. I also would have removed the papers from the upper left hand corner. They make the layout a little busy and are picking up too much light(brings my attention there). |
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| 12/14/2003 03:58:03 PM |
softby agwrightComment: From the Critique Club :
Great shot!
As a flower lover and shooter, I can appreciate this one even more.
Obviously by your score, your photo was well liked.
You did a great job achieving soft focus without making the flower look blurry.
Lighting and composition were good, especially the stem placed in the corner. You achieved a nice deep black background and picked a nice simple border to complete this.
It's hard to critique the good ones :)
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| 12/13/2003 08:50:51 AM |
Cibolo Vaqueroby GordonComment: Hey Gordon,
This is my first "critique club" image, so here goes:
The image has good use of duotone. Composition is also very good. I really like the shadows on the building.
While I know you intentionally added grain, I'm not sure it is effective here. I notice it mainly in the sky. Also, could be due to the stockings.
I see that you used stockings over the lens, just wish the effect was a little more noticable.
In this challenge I think voters needed an "in your face" soft focus....your's, though effective for the shot, was not noticable enough for them.
BTW, I am not thrilled to receive your's as my first, because I know you are already a great photographer, and what ever you did with this shot was your intention. I can't help or teach you anything you don't already know.
Keep it up :)
Terry |
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| 12/11/2003 05:06:19 AM |
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| 12/11/2003 04:56:14 AM |
Cheers!by MichaelsComment: Interesting abstract. My only complaint is a little noise in the upper red portion. Maybe oversaturation. |
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| 12/11/2003 04:47:10 AM |
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| 12/11/2003 04:46:36 AM |
simple wonderby grigrigirlComment: how cute. I would have left a little more on top.
But I do like the nice close crop otherwise, it makes for an intimate portrait. |
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| 12/11/2003 04:41:48 AM |
Uncultivatedby Glen KingComment: this would be much more effective if you didnt cut the pic in half by the sky/ground. Next time try a one third/two thirds crop. |
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| 12/11/2003 03:46:35 AM |
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