Unpredictability
by livingfiction

Comment:
The image on the far left doesn't look like the same person as the others, because we can't see her hair in the flashes on the right, and because the expression is so different. The lighting is also not as drastic (light source farther away?) I'd actually crop out the left third of this image, or just edit out that last personality.

Wedding Ring
by BobsterLobster

Comment:
Very nice as a vertical shot. I'm not lowering my rating of this photograph for the orientation, since it doesn't really change the image at all, but I don't think that the horizontal rotation works at all here. Unless she's laying on black sheets, this doesn't make sense. Otherwise, I love the graininess, the focus control, the tones... it's a lovely shot.

Defined Lips on Frown
by kevrobertson

Comment:
The large amount of shirt distracts from his face.

Something About Those Eyes
by Damian

Comment:
Or something about that eye? It seems to me that if the eyes are the subject, they should both be visible. Otherwise, very well done.

Warmth
by joanns

Comment:
Photographically excellent, but the pastels and neutrals of the dried eucalyptus (and whatever those blue things are) seems to me to clash badly with the strong geometrics of her scarf. I'm sure your choice of props was intentional, this being a studio shot, but to a casual viewer it just doesn't fit. The stool is fine, but I'd definitely lose the other stuff on this shot.

The Splash of a Kiwi
by terje

Comment:
I might have called this "Kiwi Cloud" or "Atomic Kiwi" or perhaps "the K Bomb". Very nicely done, although I wonder why it was necesary to blur the background. The highlights are so vivid that I'd think that green would be neutral enough without extra attention.

Gasoline
by Gringo

Comment:
Nice desaturation/coloration, it really gives each of the colored items its own significance. Well done.

Awakening
by kirbic

Comment:
Better without the bottom fifth of the image.

"Back" Cover Girl
by DougPaz

Comment:
A rather large stripe down the side of her left arm has been desaturated. Otherwise, excellent!

Cowboy at work
by photom

Comment:
Great shot! My only complaint is the shadow that your fill flash cast across his face.