Self -Portrait
by chelseayankie

Comment:
Nice framing, but I'm not crazy about the knee - it's kinda coming out of nowhere and looks a little strange. Would have liked to see this in color for the eyes.

Steamed Up
by RiderGal

Comment:
I think i have the same shower curtain. that backlight is a killer - washes out all the colors.

My - Self - Portrait
by frozensun

Comment:
The framing could be a little better - no offense, but the way it is is a little boring. Nice scenery though. sunglasses not really necessary.

Back to the old days
by eweb

Comment:
whoa, easy on the sepia. i'm a little overwhelmed by that. that stairway is nice, should have used a bit more of it. also, you should have done something to stand out from the background. nat light, a flash, something

Half of Me is Blue...
by pinback

Comment:
I think the crop could be better here. I guess you were going for the neg space thing, but based on your face in the frame, I don't think it works too well. Might want to crop out all the black on the right then crop so your nose is centered - more of a portrait orientation rather than a square.

Broken Mirror = 7 years bad luck
by Twocentz

Comment:
a shame about the border at the bottom being off. i don't think you need it anyway. nice shot, good focus.

Blew it
by Froober

Comment:
I like this shot, but I think it would look better if the top of the background was pure white to match the rest of the shot.

Out of the Blue
by Jean

Comment:
Interesting shot! I especially like the clear reflection.

The Pencil That Was
by fas-ligand

Comment:
Nice shot. A little more curve in the cut up pencil might be nice. I'd also like to see just a bit more DOF so the eraser was in focus.

Evolution
by MarkRob

Comment:
Nice idea, but I think you could have done some things better. A little more light on the pencils would help them stand out more. Also, you might want to set them up a few feet in front of the background to give some depth. The tip of the pencils at the far right and far left are out of focus. This could use a little counter-clockwise rotation and you should save at the best quality that gives you a file less than 150k. There are some jpeg artifacts.