Let me sleep in!!!
by cloe15

Comment by Pikkel:
i know i GET demerits for lighting the idea is cute but maybe we both need to work on that a bit for effect

Let me sleep in!!!
by cloe15

Comment by ace flyman:
I'm just going to give some tips that I think would improve this shot. The lighting is harsh infront appears used on board flash, maybe not flash, use nature light with the correct white balance. The composition is centered top to bottom, maybe go 1/3 down. The focus appears off, maybe just focusing on the face and let the rest a little blurred. Some of my opinion is processing and the other is equipment.....ace

Let me sleep in!!!
by cloe15

Comment by cablondeone:
too late out the night before?

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Comment by lindzeb:
this is good but its a little bright

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Comment by Kurosu:
Woooooooo.
:P
I like how it's focused around her and circled with the lightning.

Let me sleep in!!!
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Comment by quiche:
Blown highlights.

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Comment by mchalmers:
Haha.. Those pajamas rock!

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Comment by TCGuru:
Cute PJs :) Your colour seems to be a bit off (yellow). WB to tungsten in this situation. You also have quite a bit of noise (grain) in the photo. A lower ISO can fix this. Try to shoot everything indoors at ISO 100 when possible. You will get less noise. :)

Let me sleep in!!!
by cloe15

Comment by kaiser_chief:
Overexposed area on the sheet, although there for the effect of the sun shinning through the window, is a little overdone and distracting for me. Photo looks noisy, skin tones don't look right to me, she is very orange, and the clashing colours also put me off. Pink?orange/Yellow/Brown all together I don't think has worked.

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Comment by jomari:
The light is pretty harsh. ( to wake him up? )