Kalei na me (gorgeous eyes)
by Lilychandesu

Comment by boyd2000:
Hawaiian words? This composition really justifies the long framing. The focus could have been much better to catch the eyes of both of the models much better. I'd recommend better lighting and a higher f stop.

Kalei na me (gorgeous eyes)
by Lilychandesu

Comment by flipix:
Less blur would make this photo stand out more

Antiquus
by Lilychandesu

Comment by JulietNN:
very nice shot would have loved to have seen more details in teh feather though. love the colour, very warm and inviting. making you want to write with these pens. well done 8

Himawari
by Lilychandesu

Comment by mchalmers:
I find this to be a nice photo. Here's a few things that would make me score this much higher (If you'll indulge me!)
- Using a real flower instead of a silk one. This just looks too fake to me.
- Brighter light, making the photo more high key.
- The face is a bit too shiny and unevenly lit. Some makeup and more light would really make a difference.

Himawari
by Lilychandesu

Comment by geinafets:
I think this might have worked a bit better if the flower and the face were both in focus.

Meow
by Lilychandesu

Comment by Haneck:
Excellent lighting! I only wish I could see the headphones (?) a little better, because at first glance, I'm not sure what they are, and my eyes want to dismiss it as clutter that shouldn't be there. Just a thought. :)

Meow
by Lilychandesu

Comment by Yo_Spiff:
A fun one. I like the strong colors and the toungue. I can see through her glasses and here eyes just a little. I think either the glasses needed to be darkened so here eyes are not seen, or lightened up so they are more visible. As they are, it is mildly distracting and changes the view of the image once you notice they eyeballs. Still worth a good 6.

Meow
by Lilychandesu

Comment by DistantColours:
The shadow is too harsh.