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A Meditation
09/04/2007 08:24:28 AM
A Meditation
by dseablom

Comment by jeger:
Crop at the bottom a little awkward.
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A Meditation
09/01/2007 09:40:06 AM
A Meditation
by dseablom

Comment by stevenov:
The shadow across the face spoils this rather nice image.
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A Dreamy Afternoon
08/28/2007 06:51:12 PM
A Dreamy Afternoon
by dseablom

Comment by srdanz:
Greetings from Critique Club!

.. and welcome to DPC. Well, you did not come in dead last, but it was somewhat of the below-average showing.

My first impression (when I first saw this image, I did not look at the challenge topic nor I have seen your score) was that the image is lacking technical quality to achieve the above 5.5 rating at DPC. The colors are hazy, either because of the sloppy post-processing, or, more likely, by slightly overexposed shot. The second impression was that there isn't a readily identifiable subject in this photo, (by now I've seen the challenge topic), and while it does not necessarily fail to meet the challenge description, it fails to wow the viewer with unique attractive scenery.

Therefore, you ended up with a relatively uninteresting shot of the woods, which is less than perfect technically.

I would recommend for the future avoiding ISO400 for the daytime photos. It only increases the noise and does not contribute to the image. Since you were going for a dreamy look, f/8 was probably not necessary, too.

It'd be interesting to see you get better - follow the forums (individual photo discussion is exceptional) and ask questions on your own photos. However, this is a small part of the photo world - make sure you always remember that DPC and the opinions of DPC members does not necessarily represent the true value of your photography; it just gives you an insight into what one category of people think about it.

So, keep shooting and keep submitting to challenges and participate in forums. Giving someone else a critique may get you to look at your own photos with different eyes.

I hope this helps!

best of luck,

-Serge
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Not My Will, but Thine
08/27/2007 10:34:22 PM
Not My Will, but Thine
by dseablom

Comment by photobuddy:
simple and nice..what i like the most is the light,clarity. I might have tried a different composition though
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Not My Will, but Thine
08/27/2007 03:09:11 PM
Not My Will, but Thine
by dseablom

Comment by vtruan:
beautiful....
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"Wings Over Buffalo"
08/25/2007 09:40:47 PM
"Wings Over Buffalo"
by dseablom

Comment by SDW:
Nice pov, colors, and lighting.
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Not My Will, but Thine
08/25/2007 07:18:48 AM
Not My Will, but Thine
by dseablom

Comment by Ames:
Not sure about the composition. I dont think the bottom quarter of the shot adds much. Well lit, good exposure.
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Not My Will, but Thine
08/24/2007 09:13:13 AM
Not My Will, but Thine
by dseablom

Comment by ChicPhotog:
Kind of boring in a way.....Doesn't really pull my attention. Maybe if you cut the stole or table out of the bottom the shot couldve worked better!
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Not My Will, but Thine
08/22/2007 10:31:16 PM
Not My Will, but Thine
by dseablom

Comment by ilphoto:
Prefer to crop on below till the table
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Not My Will, but Thine
08/22/2007 06:28:17 PM
Not My Will, but Thine
by dseablom

Comment by codfish:
Very nice image, the colors are perfect
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