Bring Me A Dream
by moono

Comment by drydoc:
Les Paul and Mary Ford! Just wishe there was a little more focus to your shot. BOL.

Bring Me A Dream
by moono

Comment by Ram21:
Good capture.

Bring Me A Dream
by moono

Comment by gstrotmann:
Nice framin and motive. But with "Bring me a dream" I suggested a warm colour for the pic. The grey tone is very hard. Have you tried to take a shot with a sharp needle? I believe it would be better, than the viewer couln't the LP title and have a dream about his personal music (dream). Perhaps. So only 5

Bring Me A Dream
by moono

Comment by solarys:
I would have rated higher if the needle/arm were more in focus and the record was shown with a spin motion blur.

Bring Me A Dream
by moono

Comment by clauderbaugh:
Great idea. You'd have gotten my 10 for this challenge if this was a bit more focused throughout. The label in focus but my eye is blocked by the (out of focus) needle.

Bring Me A Dream
by moono

Comment by vtruan:
deiinately meet the challenge. IMO it was cropped a bit too tight.

Bring Me A Dream
by moono

Comment by hgpayne:
It took me some time to figure out what I was looking at. The arm and needle should be sharper and the label could use some contrast so I could see the words better. Nice idea, nice angle to the shot, DOF needs work.

Digital Spectrum
by moono

Comment by K-Rob:
You were robbed! Why isn't this in the top 10!?!?! My favorite.

Dark Light
by moono

Comment by Annida:
Hello from the critique club!

Hi Oebi,

Now, this is a true abstract. Voters dislike not knowing what something is, and they tend to vote lower than they would if you gave a clue as to what this is. lol, believe me, I am having the same problem right now on one of the challenges.
Anyway, on to your picture. The one thing you could have done to improve your score was to give more of a hint as to what this is.
I think a lot of people would have complained about how dark this photo is as well. So better lighting would have helped a bit.
It also looks a bit.. blurry, which means points were removed because of that.
Personally I like this shot. I like abstracts though.
Good luck in the next challenges
-Annida

Digital Spectrum
by moono

Comment by SteveS:
Very, very nice. Good job.