Lysterfield Park Entrance
by CuE

Comment by ndbryan38:
I really like the way the two women are framed. Only a small part of the overall picture! (I wisth my screen were big enough to see the whole image at one time).

Lysterfield Park Entrance
by CuE

Comment by Trinity_12_12:
Just wondering if a polariser would have reduced some of the glare on the trees and along the top of the picture.

Lysterfield Park Entrance
by CuE

Comment by Bruce_the_Robert:
There are some things I really like about this image, such as the way the light falls on the models and the bare part of the tree branch above them, but it is far too bright in the sky, and in such bright light I would have liked a wider depth of field so that the background was punchier in relation to the foreground.

Lysterfield Park Entrance
by CuE

Comment by Claya:
Compositionally I think this would have been beter with girls already through the gate and into the grass clearning. Here's why: Since you can't see the girl's faces making them smaller really wouldn't detract -- the girls aren't the subject of the photo anyway. Also it would have put the girls completely on a "third" point that leads eye into photo. Anyway, just MHO.

Lysterfield Park Entrance
by CuE

Comment by glad2badad:
This photo has good potential. If you had cropped the top third off it would be MUCH stronger. JMO of course. :D The girls are well focused and the color is ok - maybe a slight boost in saturation. Anyway, good luck in the challenge.

Lysterfield Park Entrance
by CuE

Comment by MelonMusketeer:
Nice image except for the people beyond the girls.

Lysterfield Park Entrance
by CuE

Comment by outland:
I think I might have tilted the camera down some. That way you would loose the overexposed sky and not cut off the models in such an awkward way.

Lysterfield Park Entrance
by CuE

Comment by Retroesque:
Victoria?