11:18 pm
by mdintraining

Comment by idnic:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Hi there! Love the clock in this shot and overall its a nice shot, but I think it has a couple of problems. While the clock is at a strong thirds point, the street lights draw the eye away from the clock and down the street. I think a very shallow depth of field would have helped compositionally as it would preserve the nice lights in the background, but not all of the detail (everything would go blurry). That would help to keep the attention on the clock. I also think this would make a lovely black and white image; more drama. Hope that helps.

Cindi

11:18 pm
by mdintraining

Comment by Efergoh:
The light blooms and the moving car take away from it, but this is still pretty good. Good use of available light.

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11:18 pm
by mdintraining

Comment by signal2noise:
Nice Shot. I may have rated this a little higher than it deserved... but it is my alma mater. This shot makes me miss Athens.

11:18 pm
by mdintraining

Comment by jblaylockrayner:
Like the car which adds interest - The lamp next to the clock though is very distracting

Long Pencil
by mdintraining

Comment by shutterpuppy:
focus point on the eraser would have been more interesting, where it is doesn't really make sense to me. light/exposure is flat. 4.