On Track for a Lasting Love
by Shea927

Comment by Paul:
Greetings from the Critique Club:

Great technicals here in terms of focus exposure etc but the apparent tilt is problematic as is the cropping of her knee and finger. They are a great couple and this is a really good picture of them but they do dominate the scene; we see the tracks but you make us not care, your composition asks us not to look - "look at the people please". I suspect your score would have been fairly similar if you took this same scene without the couple; that give's you a sense of what they have brought to the scene.

Without them, you had many processing possibilities; with them, your kind of compelled to treated them with some (editing) respect. They limit your options for getting creative.

Just some thoughts...

Regards

Paul

On Track for a Lasting Love
by Shea927

Comment by giantmike:
Very cute. I really like this idea.

On Track for a Lasting Love
by Shea927

Comment by marabu61:
I hope so for them, so cute

On Track for a Lasting Love
by Shea927

Comment by EL-ROI:
Nice light and color but the composition is confusing.

On Track for a Lasting Love
by Shea927

Comment by Neat:
not if a train comes along though....lol

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Addison 6 Months Old
by Shea927

Comment by eye4abstract:
Sweet photo, I like the dark background very well composed.

Addison 6 Months Old
by Shea927

Comment by EL-ROI:
Definitely a cutie and a natural model! Great Pose! The lighting is nice and even. Great catch lights in the eyes. The picture could be a tad sharper and a tad brighter overall. But otherwise excellent!

Addison 6 Months Old
by Shea927

Comment by Denise:
she's beautiful, only 6 months old and looking like a pro at a photo shoot

Addison 6 Months Old
by Shea927

Comment by Dirt_Diver:
Very cute but a little soft on the focus.

Refreshment Found in Warm Summer Rain
by Shea927

Comment by adigitalromance:
This is a beautiful image.