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| 01/03/2007 01:51:30 PM |
Chain Linkby robinsphotosComment by PDXKim: Nice composition. Chain link is harder to make interesting than some other fencing and you did a nice job here. |
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| 10/13/2006 06:52:24 AM |
No Feeding The Ducksby robinsphotosComment by CNovack: I like how you place these rubber duckys in an environment where one normally sees live ducks. However, the composition does need some improvement if you want to hold your audiences attention. First off, your main subjects, the duckys, are so small in relative proportion to the surrounding environment which makes up the photo. The duckys makes up perhaps 4% of the photo and are lost in their environment. They literally gets lost amoung the river scene. What is needed to strengthen the composition is to get a closer shot of your Ducky, such that it makes up 35% or more of your shot. By getting closer to your main subject(s)you draq in your viewers closer to the action or scene you are trying to present. My next suggestion may prove a bit challenging given that these two duckys are free floating. A side view or a frontal view showing the duckys faces would be better. All we get to see is the backside which is not as interesting as the face which can show expression. I don't know if the duckys are wearing a happy face, a grumpy face (yes, I have seen some like this) or what looks like a surprised face. The viewers cannot see the expression which would add visual interest to your photo. |
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| 10/11/2006 08:23:13 AM |
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| 10/10/2006 09:00:28 PM |
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