Stoned
by spartacus9

Comment by rjhawkin:
nice texture and size proportions. interesting use of color, but has good tonal range.

Feeling ducky
by spartacus9

Comment by BHuseman:
No, can't say that I am. But it looks like you are....good use of DOF. But it looks a little soft. 6.

Feeling ducky
by spartacus9

Comment by munkinut:
Wonderful colour. Made me smile.

The peeking Seuss
by spartacus9

Comment by lovethelight:
You could have improved this by positioing her away from her background, that way you could use a shallow depth of field to blur out the background and minimize the shaddow

The peeking Seuss
by spartacus9

Comment by Beetle:
I love your idea, the girl, the hat, the composition. However, the background is no good :-( Try putting more distance between your subject and the background, and use a large aperture to blur the wrinkles.

The peeking Seuss
by spartacus9

Comment by cools98:
Fit Challenge Criteria: 0/2
Contrast/Color: 1/2
Composition: 1/2
Photo Quality: 1/2
My Subjective Affinity: 1/2

This photo does have negative space, but there is no impact in it at all. The only real impact is the subject's blue eyes. The white sheet needs to be whiter, and the red hat also lacks the vivid colors that would really make that stand out.

The peeking Seuss
by spartacus9

Comment by bergiekat:
This is very nice colorwise. Your composition is good. Cute model.

The peeking Seuss
by spartacus9

Comment by posthumous:
a more complex shape will create interesting ns

The peeking Seuss
by spartacus9

Comment by JeffDay:
this is a cute image and good for the challenge, might do a bit better if the backround wasn't a sheet.

The peeking Seuss
by spartacus9

Comment by philup:
nice eyes! 7