We'll Cross that Bridge When we Come to it.
by Sylva7

Comment by arnit:
Don't know why but I like this shot. The treebranches on the right bothers me a bit. A good picture all over. Great use of sepia tones. Good luck.

We'll Cross that Bridge When we Come to it.
by Sylva7

Comment by front_element:
I like it. I wonder if you considered a version without the human figure in it?

We'll Cross that Bridge When we Come to it.
by Sylva7

Comment by Elaine:
I think this shot would be more interesting if the bridge was off-centered.

We'll Cross that Bridge When we Come to it.
by Sylva7

Comment by MacDonald:
I like the sepia tone in this photo and the bridgfe looks interesting as well. I like how you included the tree on the left in your composition.

Connections
by Sylva7

Comment by GIS_boy:
A touch busy to work as a negative for me

Natural Environment.
by Sylva7

Comment by kari1:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
Is an interesting composition ... but doesn't really meet the challenge ... don't let that stop you from entering again ...

Composition:
I would like to see more of the person ... just a bit more face from behind the tree (that is if it was a portrait type) ... in a candid this you can't often control. This is an interesint crop but it feels like the tree is a barrier.

Subject:
Does not seem to meet the challenge. but that ain't the be all and end all of life really.

Technical (Colour and light):
I am one of the people who loves colour when it comes to shots taken in nature ... here the black and white seems a little much .. it works but I think colour would help.

To grow its vote?:
Well meeting the challenge helps .. if you have not sure about how to chekc the forums ..poeple quite often discuss the challenges in the week of entry.

Summary:
Lovely shot ... will be looking for more from you!

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

Iron History
by Sylva7

Comment by dsidwell:
Superb juxtaposition of texture here. I like the contrasty tones, too.

Iron History
by Sylva7

Comment by Rebecca:
Great texture in this photo, nice clarity - the only thing that distracts is the white space in the upper left corner. It feels like you cut the corner off. I'd like to see the wall and stairs fill the entire frame.

Iron History
by Sylva7

Comment by MrXpress:
Very nice! The only thing that doesn't appeal to me is the overly bright sky in the upper left; I think it should have been toned down a little considering the drab look of the image, as it just stands out a little too much.

Natural Environment.
by Sylva7

Comment by espy2:
I'm not much for receiving or giving comments, but since Candids are
near and dear to my heart, I have decided to give comment on every entry
in this challenge.

Not really a candid to me. Seems to be hiding from the camera but then gets caught and laughs. I like to see something a bit more out of the ordinary or that has a bit of a kick to it. I do like the tones, and good dof on the face rather than the tree or the background.