Salt Works.jpg
by WatermelonSugar

Comment by neophyte:
Well composed shot.

Spiral.jpg
by WatermelonSugar

Comment by alfresco:
Very cool photo. Excellent leading line and placement of the spiral core. The color doesn't have much impact for me, I wonder how it would look in b/w. Anyway, very nice photo!

Sleep
by WatermelonSugar

Comment by danica22:
great capture, try a closer cropping

The Galaxie
by WatermelonSugar

Comment by danica22:
great composition, b&w works well here

Dodge in Sepia
by WatermelonSugar

Comment by danica22:
looks like a very cool image-try uploading a bigger one, its a bit difficult to see...

Spices.jpg
by WatermelonSugar

Comment by Germaine:
Good subject matter. The perspective makes me feel as if everything is about to fall off the table, but that's me. Also, a lot of "noise" in the dark areas. If that's what you wanted, fine, but do you have access to Neat Image or some program like that?

The Galaxie
by WatermelonSugar

Comment by arsenal:
i like the prespective from where you shot this and how only a part of the car is shown

Sleep
by WatermelonSugar

Comment by suemack:
Nice work. I really like where you are going with this shot.

I think I might have framed it a bit differently though, horizontal not vertical and cropped in closer to the post he's sitting on so you couldn't see the landscape behind him. This would show more of the concrete on the right, less of the bars above. He'd have been nestling in the corner, not the centre of the shot, and just then added a bit more (-)brightness/(+)contrast.

Looking forward to seeing more of your work.

sue