A Splash of Color
by
RackatComment by zadore: ...from Critique Club...
Hi Rackat...ain't I lucky..they assigned your photo to me..ha
FIRST IMPRESSION:
Horrible shot...what were you thinking????
COMPOSITION:
Totally off. It would have worked much better if it were upside down...and reversed horizontaly.
TECHNICAL:
Focus is toooo sharp. Lightin is poor, cause the dark parts are dark...and the light parts are light. DOF is hard to tell, so I won't comment on that.
ARTISTIC:
Completely boring to look at. There is no dynamic to your photo, it's flat, uninteresting. Oh, and it does NOT meet the challenge...there's nothing 'Free' about this 'Study'
OVERALL:
I am very disappointed in you, Rackat. I enjoyed most of your work, but this is just plain horrible. I expect better next time.
Best of luck in the future. Don't hesitate to PM me if you have any questions about this critique.
Cheers...zadore.
...and now the serious part :) I don't have to repeat what everyone has already mentioned about this photo. I hope some day to create a piece of art as great as this.
CONGRATULATIONS FROM THE CRITIQUE CLUB!!! :)