Before Playstation
by wasp

Comment by racha:
This photo is way overexposed. The kids are kind of pinkish too. I can't see one boy's eyes, if you're taking a picture of someone's face it is most important that you can see their eyeballs.

Before Playstation
by wasp

Comment by bobdaveant:
The whites seems a little blown out, but I like the theme of the photo.

Before Playstation
by wasp

Comment by Tammer:
For me, the lighting is a bit bright and it's unfortunate that the one boy has his arm across his face...and I'm curious as to what or who they are looking at. :-)

Before Playstation
by wasp

Comment by BK1017:
I like the title & idea behind it

Before Playstation
by wasp

Comment by ZorbaTheGeek:
Unfortunately the two boys are a bit low in the frame. THe lower of the two has his arm across his eyes meaning we can't see his face. It's generally a goo idea to avoid severing a limb at a joint (ankle, knee, wrist etc) and try to crop halfway along a bone. Focus and exposure are good.

Before Playstation
by wasp

Comment by KarenB:
isn't THAT the truth! :)

Before Playstation
by wasp

Comment by Germaine:
Good idea and it certainly meets the challenge. I would tweak the colors a little. It's too bad the boy on the bottom has his arm in front of his face.

Before Playstation
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Comment by Caine:
It would be ironic if the logo on that shirt was from a playstation game. The composition would be vastly improved if the two boys were fully in shot and the interaction between them and the branches was the entire subject. Some canopy in the top of the frame (think rule of thirds) would work, but there's far too much at the moment.

Before Playstation
by wasp

Comment by stphq:
good title... so very true.... (now where did i put my tekken game disk... hee hee)

50's Movie Maker
by wasp

Comment by AtlantaRockScene:
Very soft focus, it would be better if more of the dials were crisp. Good subject matter though!