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| 05/25/2004 05:14:47 PM |
Smokeby matiscroComment by orussell: Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background (20% Weight): 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing (20% Weight): 4
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. (30% Weight): 5
How well does it meet the challenge (30% Weight): 8
Total Rating (Rounded) 6
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| 05/25/2004 10:22:44 AM |
Smokeby matiscroComment by panosm: I love the posterization effect on the girl's face. I'm very curious to know how to do that given the editing rules. |
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| 05/25/2004 10:22:27 AM |
Smokeby matiscroComment by Hayane: This shot could be amazing -- I'd increase the contrast on the hand and cigarette more, crop it a bit closer, and make it nearly abstract...as it is, 5 |
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| 05/24/2004 02:16:27 PM |
Smokeby matiscroComment by Jesuispeure: I like the composition and the DOF alot, but I'd like to see just a few more midtones, especially around the hand, to distinguish it from the background. |
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| 05/24/2004 11:21:25 AM |
Smokeby matiscroComment by drgsoell: The lack of contrast on the hand and it's position make it look disconnected to the person in the background. |
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| 05/22/2004 09:09:11 PM |
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| 05/22/2004 05:55:59 PM |
Smokeby matiscroComment by port: Great idea but I think that you could rise the contrast and improve the focus on the cigarette. |
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| 05/22/2004 02:24:15 PM |
Smokeby matiscroComment by gajmaj: Nice tonal qualities and great contrast. Great DOF (or is that soft focus?). |
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| 05/22/2004 03:55:43 AM |
Smokeby matiscroComment by s4nd3r99: I was sure someone gonna take a picture of that :-)
Good picture though, I like the DOF, I wonder how it would look in colour. |
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| 05/21/2004 09:40:22 PM |
Smokeby matiscroComment by melismatica: I don't know if this was intentional on your part bu this is way too high key and contrasty. Some shadow details in her hand and more visible smoke would have been nice. I'm distracted by that area of shadowy lumpiness between her hand and her hair. I like the perspective. |
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