dpchallengett
by FirstwolfAk

Comment by giantmike:
Overall, a good start to a car add style photo. I have some suggestions that may help you improve it (at least in my mind)
* Clone out those power lines. It would also be good to de-vignette (your lens has a slight amount of vignette in the corners.
* The car is really dark. Dodging it a bit would help. You really want that thing to shine
* Remove the license plate. The yellow is out of place.

Hope this helps.

Clone Trooper
by FirstwolfAk

Comment by Mike:
almost works. you have lots of great hard edges to play with but you didn't light them properly. the shadows need to be darker. see how the shadow on the face blends almost perfectly with the black visor and black lines? you needed to do that on the whole body. i shouldn't be able to see the right arm or leg.